Dwarf Ankylosaur ([info]dwarfankylosaur) wrote,
@ 2008-02-22 21:57:00
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Fic: Untitled Henricksen Snippet, PG-13
Circa Night Shifter, Henricksen muses on the Winchester brothers and the evidence at his disposal. He is, of course, so very, very wrong. 350 words.

Henricksen understands Dean Winchester. Deep down, Dean's just another pissed-off white guy, out to punish the world for not bowing down before him like Daddy and Pat Buchanan promised him it would. That's why he tried to destroy Zack, with his fancy college degree and his bright future. That's why he kills classy, educated women like and Becky Sanders and Jessica Moore, the kind who'd never give a guy like Dean a second glance unless he held a knife to their thoats and made them. Henricksen has nothing but contempt for men like Dean, all those selfish, vicious children in grown-up bodies, but he understands them, and sometimes, maybe, he pities them.
Sam's different. Sam's worse.
Sam hasn't been directly linked to any of the murders, and as far as Henricksen knows, he's never done anything but sit idly by as his brother tortured some poor woman to death. Henricksen can picture it far too clearly -- Sam on the sidelines, his own hands all white and clean, watching his brother work, maybe breathing a little faster as this week's girl bleeds out onto the carpet. He's seen Sam's interrogation tapes, all wide-eyed, earnest smugness, and he can see just how it's going to play out when they finally bring the Winchesters in: He made me do it, Officer, I thought he was going to kill me, thank God it's finally over. Sam thinks he's above it all, thinks he can get his thrills without paying the price. This is all a game to him. But it's not a game to Dean, and Henricksen knows something Sam doesn't know.
Thing is, Henricksen sees a pattern in the trail of bodies that maybe even Dean doesn't see. He knows why Dean slices up all those rich college boys. He knows why Dean's first kill was Jessica Moore, the perfect woman Sam won and Dean would never have a chance with. Dean's been dancing around what he really wants for a long time, but Henricksen knows what it is, even if Dean himself doesn't.
Part of Hendricksen hopes Dean figures it out before they catch him.

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God, I so desperately want a story about the psycho Winchester Brothers the FBI is chasing, with in-depth exploration of their childhood and Sam's Stanford years and guest appearances by ParamilitaryNutjob!John. I may have to write it.




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yes!
[info]catdancerz
2008-02-23 04:02 am UTC (link)
write it! and this...oh my...your henricksen is a cool calculating bastard now isn't he...

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Re: yes!
[info]dwarfankylosaur
2008-02-25 01:48 am UTC (link)
It's why we love him.

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[info]tigriswolf
2008-02-23 04:32 am UTC (link)
Wriiiiiite. You know you want to!

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[info]dwarfankylosaur
2008-02-25 01:55 am UTC (link)
If I wrote it, would you read it over (assuming a word count of less than 15,000 and serious creepiness)?
BTW, I am behind on comments, but the SPN drabble you posted today was extremely satisfying.

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[info]tigriswolf
2008-02-25 02:35 am UTC (link)
Thank you!

'long as there's no NC-17 sex scenes, I'd be happy to read over it!

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[info]jekesta
2008-02-23 03:03 pm UTC (link)
I love this, it's brilliant and really really works. ::dances you hard::

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[info]dwarfankylosaur
2008-02-25 01:55 am UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]sadelyrate
2008-02-24 11:33 pm UTC (link)
I do believe I'm slowly but surely beginning to fan the heck out of Henriksen. There's far too few fics with him.

And this is one of the most awesome. *smish*

You really should see if there'd be more to this.

Thank You for letting us see this! :)

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[info]dwarfankylosaur
2008-02-25 02:00 am UTC (link)
Thanks! (I was praying for an episode where Henricksen actually lays out his theories about the Winchesters' childhoods and formative experiences. And now I shall never get it. *sniff*)
And I don't know about more to this particular story -- this was really all I got -- but there should definitely be more Henricksen fic out there. This deficiency is a black mark on fandom, I say.

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[info]sadelyrate
2008-02-26 08:57 pm UTC (link)
I was hoping for a Henriksen-ep, too. One from his POV. But I think Kripke & co. don't dare try Outsider POV-idea yet...

Henriksen is quite a curious character, and he has his own voice, and if he would only talk to me, I so would write fics about/featuring him.

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[info]auroramama
2008-02-25 04:49 am UTC (link)
*oooh*. I love that he's wrong, wrong, wrong... but not about that.

That little canon half-line about white supremacists and survivalists opened up a whole world to me. Of course he'd see them that way. The way you've expanded and unfolded that here, and made such plausible, vicious monsters out of the boys, is pure seduction. Yeah, you may have to write it.

And such a dark wish, that Dean should be confronted with an aspect of himself that (he thinks) even a monster like that would be appalled by. But it's so reasonable to want the gorgon to see itself.

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Wrong again
[info]auroramama
2008-02-27 06:46 pm UTC (link)
...is me. Read this aloud to the spouse, who said, "Because Sam is the one who would get away." I didn't get it until then -- that Hendriksen hopes Dean will kill Sam, that he thinks death is what Dean wants. Oh, am I dense. No fault of the story. It isn't just my slash glasses, since spouse is a Wincest fan too, but perhaps as the older of two, with a particularly vulnerable younger sibling, my mind just wouldn't go there. (Spouse is a middle child.)

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Re: Wrong again
[info]dwarfankylosaur
2008-03-22 12:44 am UTC (link)
Wow, I suck *so bad* at answering comments in a timely fashion.

You didn't come to the conclusion I was aiming for, but that doesn't mean you were wrong. I was really aware of how it would sound when I was writing this -- I feel like the line between the kind of overwhelming, obsessive love we see on the show and something even creepier is really fascinating. Honestly, Hendricksen's hypothetical Dean probably wants to do both. < g >

And yeah, I'm the eldest in a family with not-so-involved parents, and I'm totally with you on the mind block.

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Re: Wrong again
[info]auroramama
2008-03-22 01:32 am UTC (link)
You totally win for answering. And yeah, the line is fascinating and possibly all stretchy. The idea of Hendricksen's Dean wanting both, yes -- as if under Hendricksen's best-guess conception of a sadistic killer there's someone who is just so fucked up that he doesn't know the difference. There's a kind of innocence in that, and I wonder if Hendricksen has any sense of it, if it's just something he does when trying to figure out how his quarry thinks, if it's a softness in himself that he still imagines Dean that way, or if he's right, if that's really what would be going on if Dean were the person he thinks him to be.

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[info]gwendolyngrace
2008-02-25 03:51 pm UTC (link)
LOVE. IT.

Because it's so true: Henriksen spent so much time trying to profile them in the existing boxes he had available, so even up to the time he got possessed and learned the truth first-hand in JiB, he was operating on assumptions based on other serial killer profiles.

Y'know what I want? A mini-xover where Henriksen meets with the team from "Criminal Minds" to get Dean's unsub profile and more and more about his hunt for them, and what he gleans from interviews when it just doesn't fit together, but he's shoehorning it into the patterns anyway.

And I love how your Henriksen recognizes the deeper, darker currents of Sam even without knowing anything about Sam's silly "destiny."

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[info]dwarfankylosaur
2008-03-22 12:48 am UTC (link)
Sorry it took, like, a month to write back to this.
Actually, a Criminal Minds xover already exists, although there's not nearly as much profiling as I'd like: http://www.fanfic.otherplaces.net/defect.htm
There should totally be more profiling-centric fic, though. It is a tragic shortcoming of this fandom. *nods solemnly.*

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[info]gwendolyngrace
2008-03-22 02:28 am UTC (link)
OOOH... thanks for the rec!

:Bounces off to read....

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[info]redrikki
2008-02-25 10:33 pm UTC (link)
This was brilliant. Of course that's what Henricksen would think based on his limited knowledge. What makes this piece really cool though is the extent to which he is both wrong and right. Season 1 Sam really did keep trying to distance himself from the harsher realities of hunting. Dean did all the real dirty work literally, emotionally and morally until Heart. I also liked Henricksen's insight into Dean's issues with Sam and his own wants. He's wrong about the details, but does have a point in general. Excellent work.

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[info]dwarfankylosaur
2008-03-22 12:52 am UTC (link)
Thank you! Yeah, that's exactly what I was thinking when I wrote this -- Hendricksen's wrong about most of what they're doing, but he's kind of right about Dean's issues and Sam's attitude. (Which is why I'm so glad to see Sam finally stepping up to the plate since mid-S2, even if it is a little disturbing to watch.)

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[info]britomart_is
2008-02-26 01:58 am UTC (link)
God, I so desperately want a story about the psycho Winchester Brothers the FBI is chasing, with in-depth exploration of their childhood and Sam's Stanford years and guest appearances by ParamilitaryNutjob!John. I may have to write it.
Doooooo eeeeet!

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[info]wednesdaystars
2008-05-26 05:55 pm UTC (link)
I'm adding you for fic...

Anyway! I love the last couple of lines. They're kind of shiver-inducing and it's like Henricksen could so easily be right but he missed by like 10 degrees. Love it.

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[info]spn_oscars_mods
2008-06-19 07:54 am UTC (link)
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